Ms. K’s Writing (Epiphany)

Hello Ladies and Gentleman, childen of all ages!

Here is the piece I am submitting to be reviewed. I would love some CW feedback on it. Think, subject, style, structure. What works, what doesn’t? Does it leave you wanting to read more? Is it confusing? Too much for one chapter (This is all supposed to be back story, and I really have NO idea on how to do that effectively…)  Epiphany

Your comments would be much appreciated!

I’m also struggling with a title. I think most of you know what the story is about. Any ideas?

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